Feedback - Miss Spencer

This is a hugely detailed analysis, you have taken great care to discuss the detail.
You have also noticed elements like colour and camera movement.
At the moment this work is at a level 2/3 border. In order to improve you could:

• Use more media language (Diegetic sound, long shot, zoom, iconography etc)
• Avoid descxribing what happens from shot to shot, try to analyse details without worrying exactly where they are in the sequence
• comment more on the effect on the sudience. Why did the director choose this shot/edit etc?
• Break up the text with images from the film to illustrate yourt points.